I am Up and Running!

on your "my letters" page, your letters are splitting both pages,
the 'DA's Contact info" runs outside of the tab
the face under the mirror on the photos page could be higher resolution, as could all the stock photos
make up artist falls on the stitching of every page
there is a black vertical line visible on every right hand page except photos and letters

quote: Instituted and is a Certified Professional Make-up Artist. Thought out the...

Institute?
Throughout?

quote: and that has hired and/or has recommended
have

quote: She has been working within The
has worked within the

It's just awful. First of all, your text and images don't relate to the background image. The "Alesia Pro-Make" covers the spiral in the background. It bothers me that "Make-" and "Up" are on two different lines.

There are so many grammatical, capitalization, and punctuation errors that I can't begin to enumerate them.

There are too many different fonts and font colors.

If you are posting a link to a different website, it should open in a new window.

With regard to ""Dawn Alesia's Words," don't center! Centering large sections of text is a big no-no.

The images are just badly laid out and need to be redone.

The "My Letters" page has a different layout than the other pages.

Depending on which browser one uses, the text doesn't wrap properly around the image of your face.

Layout based on tables rather than CSS is rather pass? IMO.

Sorry to be so critical. You asked, and I am giving you my professional opinion.

I like it.

Skunky!;-)

Dabell, my guess is that if you are a makeup artist, you are probably not a web programmer. My criticism was not directed toward you. If you paid someone to create this website for you, demand a refund.

I agree with BR's 2nd post. I think you need a professional web designer & writer. Find a college student who's going for a degree in web design. Cheaper and fresh ideas & colors.

Sometimes it takes several revisions to get it right. But hey Dabell, you're halfway there! Good luck!

Try www.flvhosting.com dirt cheap and local.

I think it looks good, ease the text box over a little, cut and paste the text to Word and do a spell check, all in all though she did a good job!